(depeche like) Babi Babi - my son's first song

[vrbi]

Hello,

accidentally recorded with a phone my 2,5yr son singing made up silly tune about grandmother ("babi") - so I've made it into a song - completely in Reason.
It took all my creative reserves and I tried to do my best at mixing and mastering, which I know nothing of - so constructive criticism is appreciated here.
Hope you'll like it - but I'm open to critique. One must learn things everytime.
Thank you.

[Superology]

Psychodelic. Too much vocals.

[TritoneAddiction]

Fun tune!

[Popey]

Lots of fun, and a great keepsake

[mimidancer]

sofa king cute