(Trance) Cloudy Skies - Hope for Future

[riemac]

During the last weeks I had some time to finish this trance track, which I've been working on for some time now.

I hope you enjoy it.

[Rising Night Wave]

nice interesting intro. quite old school type of trance. like it.
i see you have a lot of audio lanes. hehe. cool.
well, yes, it is an interesting song.
beautiful melody, calm, clean sound although the sound is fairly full.
construction is okey - makes song interesting and dynamic.
length is expected - 6 minutes which is okey.
mixing and mastering is also just the right.
super!

only a female vocal is missing which would do a song even more cool.

only one thing, maybe, is to be considered - changing a tempo of song.
i think this would do a song even better. i somehow think the tempo is not just the right.
try find a perfect tempo for this song. perhaps you should rise the tempo.
which would do a song even better.

well, that would be all from me.

cheers!

[riemac]

nice interesting intro. quite old school type of trance. like it.
i see you have a lot of audio lanes. hehe. cool.
well, yes, it is an interesting song.
beautiful melody, calm, clean sound although the sound is fairly full.
construction is okey - makes song interesting and dynamic.
length is expected - 6 minutes which is okey.
mixing and mastering is also just the right.
super!

only a female vocal is missing which would do a song even more cool.

only one thing, maybe, is to be considered - changing a tempo of song.
i think this would do a song even better. i somehow think the tempo is not just the right.
try find a perfect tempo for this song. perhaps you should rise the tempo.
which would do a song even better.

well, that would be all from me.

cheers!

Thank you very much for the detailed feedback. You are right with the tempo of my song, 138 bpm would fit the uplifting style as well. Because most of my other trance songs are already in this tempo, I decided that this time I wanted to go a little bit slower with 134 bpm.

A female vocal would be cool, but sadly I don‘t know any singers and doen‘t want to use overused sample libraries. If some can recommend any female singers for trance or male singer for deep house I would be very interested.

[Troublemecca]

sweet transitions! Mix is a lil' boxy... lower midrange (I think?)... nothing a lil mastering couldn't change, and agree it's crying for a vocal! even if you just throw in some adlibs "Let them eat cake... Let them eat cake..." it would add another dimension to it for sure

[drk73]

Very good!
But vocal is missing....

[Karim]

MA VIEEEEEENIIIIIII!
Can't wait to listen your stuff!

Ciauz

During the last weeks I had some time to finish this trance track, which I've been working on for some time now.

I hope you enjoy it.