(Orchestral strings/piano trance) Prove

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hu-ryu
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30 Jun 2017



Ahhhhhhh tell me what you think. Still open to suggestions. Thanks.

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Wickline
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30 Jun 2017

Just listened to it on my phone so I can't really give any audio feedback.
I really like the track though. Lots of movement and solid transitions from what I could hear.
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Daniel36
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30 Jun 2017

Live feedback time!!

Cool intro!! Nice how it suddenly goes into melody mode from static. I like!!
Reminds me of RPG music, specifically Terranigma and Illusion of Time. It makes me happy!!

After the break the melody goes a bit odd. I think it would be better to keep it simple and to use a synthetic sound instead of the string sound there.

The kick kicks haaaard! I like! I think the hats and snare could be brought up a bit though. But the build-up of elements is really nice! The string works here again. The part after, I am guessing around 2:30 or something, sounds a bit empty. Could use a warm pad to fill out the low/mid.

The break is quite nice! Takes me back into the SNES feels!

The breakdown is good, easy to mix into a new song, so that's done well!

I will say this though. There are a loooot of different parts, and while they all sound really nice in their own way, the idea of trance, at least in my mind, is to literally get you into a trance, and that is through subtle build-ups and slightly more dreamy atmospheres. Some parts are dreamy, but some parts are a bit... frantic for a lack of a better word. Maybe try and tie it all a bit more into each other for your next track.

Still, I like it a lot! In fact, it made me feel like putting up one of my fave trance mixes and chill out on that for a bit! Nostalgic times!! :)

hu-ryu
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02 Jul 2017

Thanks for the kind comments guys. WIll definitely look into the tips suggested, especially how they can still apply to future songs. I haven't listened to this song since posting! It's done my head in and I've already started on a new one.

Again, cheers for the feel goods.

Lowas
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03 Jul 2017

Nice, I like the intro the most.

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