This is great man. Three months is a long time but it really shows on a track like this. I always cringe when I see someone brag about doing a track in a night and then the track is really boring. This is interesting melodically and with sound design, but also with structure. It ebbs and flows. Sect...

I love stuff like this. The right track really makes spoken word come alive. This fits the bill nicely.

I like it. I would call it "Velocity Redux"

The play between the two synths in the treble part is dope and sounds great together. Interesting parts melodically as well. Nice job.

Nice arrangement and song. Glad to see there's someone besides me making this kind of laid back stuff with Reason. Now you just need to incorporate some Thor!

Do it! Then send me some files.... let's party! Or, just sing some stuff in a key... over a click track... and send me that too. I've been searching for a "writer not a producer" vocalist to experiment with. I want to see what kind of chops I have to be the "band in a box" type. Let's make some mag...

Really digging the sound design. Definitely has an otherworldly sound to it. I agree with Jappe about the energy kick. You do a good job of using double time in your treble over a slower bass part, meaning it works well. One thing I really love about this is that despite the fact that it's not exact...

This sounds great man. Very big sound and high energy. The mix sounds good to me in that it sounds very big but still has distinct parts that can be picked out. As usual you write very nice lyrics that work well in the song. I don't know enough about this kind of music to tell you who it sounds like...

Thanks for the feedback man. I figured this song had disappeared into the depths of reasontalk. You're probably right about the resonance. I did zero mixing on this besides putting a preset mastering patch on it. I'm glad you enjoyed the poetry. I agree that poetry is a great starting point. I alway...

This has a cool sort of jazzy swingy voice. I wouldn't exactly call this pop. At the least it's indie-pop. Your singer has a very nice voice. I get a kind of Tori Amos vibe from this. Thanks for sharing.

Hey J, like watcha say. I'm doing a lot of sonic experimentation with the minimoog. It sure needs to be pared down soundwise. I used to have the same problem with a Korg N364 (an M1 without sampling) Too rich too often but addictive. Just listened to a bunch of your stuff. Really great. What I alwa...

This is top notch! Mixed really well and the vocals are fantastic! I actually liked the drum kit used here; has a very abbey road/acoustic sound. I do agree that the highs could use a little bit pulled back to fit the darker feel of the song and some of the fills were a wee bit too mechanical for m...

Hi! Great vibe and I really like the depth of this track. I must say I feel like the drums aren't fitting into the feel and mix of the track. Lots of highs and attack to the drum timbres - also pretty dry, as if they are trying to steal the show from the other elements. Thanks for the feedback man....

Beautiful song with beautiful words. Are you still writing sonnets btw? As a beginner it was very inspiring for me to write a sonnet with you in the Poetry thread - I haven't practiced since then though! Thanks so much man. I'm still writing sonnets though not as often. May have to start doing some...

Lyrics are deep bro.. And I like the laid back vox! We might have do a collar one of these days ;) Thanks for the kind words man. Definitely be down to collab at some point. I'm getting my voice back in shape and am going to be recording a bunch of acoustic piano and vocal demos to hopefully market...

Thanks for sharing these. I prefer the second of these two. I like the spareness in the beginning and the way it builds up instead of just starting out full blast.

Cool vibe man. I dig it. What is the sound that sounds like a vocal of a goat or something. That might sound like I'm being a smart ass, but I don't know how to describe it. Maybe it's some sort of bowed instrument I don't recognize. Anyway, I dig it. It has a nice slow attack and melds nicely with ...

Very cool chilled out vibe. I agree with a previous poster that the vocal sample sounds dope but if I were you I'd chop it up and add some stutters and hip hop style cuts and breaks in the sample. It could add some nice variation. Overall I dig the track though. Check mine out if you get the chance:...

This has a very sort of chaotic/manic energy to it, laced with sinister undertones. I dig it.

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Very cool and evocative of the sort of spooky vibe of the show. Nice work. I especially like the part that comes in at about two minutes. Has almost a sort of bridge sound to it. Also dig the breakdown around 3:10. This is a cool tune. Check mine out if you get the chance: https://forum.reasontalk.c...

Hey man. I dig the sound of the acoustic/organic instruments in a sort of dance style beat and also like the more synthy sounds you bring in at the end. Hard for my ears to pick out exactly what it is. My constructive criticism would be that this song seems to wander a bit. Like it would be good to ...

Hey man. It's been a while. I really dig the sonic palette you're working with here. This doesn't sound as clean as some of your other stuff, more like you're just playing around and having fun. If you were to incorporate these sounds into a more tightly structured song it could be super dope though...

I agree with the previous poster about the bass coming through. I have to admit I didn't listen straight all the way through though. It's very long. I don't know this style of music that well though. I skipped around to get an idea of the progression though and it seems to build nicely. Check mine o...

Dig the sort of flangey/wah sound in the beginning but to me it takes a bit of time before it really melds with the beat. It sounds kind of like it's doing its own thing and aligns with the beat inconsistently in the beginning. Once it gets to the meat of the song it's really tight though. I have to...

Hey man. Been a while but it's nice to hear you're doing your thing. This isn't my favorite of your stuff, probably because I don't have the eighties nostalgia that some have. You definitely capture that vibe though and as usual your writing in a foreign language is impressive. The production sounds...

Sounds tight and clean. I saw that a previous poster commented on the lyrics but for me the singer's delivery is a bit hard to understand in places. Might be helpful to post lyrics with the track. Sounds dope though man. Check out mine if you get the chance: https://forum.reasontalk.com/viewtopic.ph...