jimmyklane wrote: ↑06 Jun 2018
PLEASE TAKE THIS AS THE HONEST OPINION THAT IT IS.
I don't want to keep repeating myself, so here are my overall thoughts:
The song is too long for the number of sections it has. It feels repetitive to me
The drums are very thin. I don't have a "driving force" that I can groove with in this track
The rest of the sounds and the synthy sound-effects are well executed and seem to fit in with the vibe you've created in the song.
It is a little repetitive, best listened to on headphones, my music for me is more about all the sparkle that goes around and I was going to bring the main bass forward (or drop a whole section before it) which I think would have made it more flowing however this was a visual and music project and the visuals were kind of slotted into place.
Drums are always last on my list, I have done a couple of tracks where I really really worked on the drums but the effort put in was not rewarding enough to me. The drums were created using punch and multi punch. Unlike other people drums on my tracks are just background fillers..
The mid to bass arp should have been a lot louder to help drive it.
My music producing is of very low output (maybe four of five tracks a year), I do way more support and the odd track pops out when it's ready too and usually when I'm doing sound designs..
Cheers for your feedback, if I revisit this track I now know what to work on.
PoohBear
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